Don’t walk on egg shells for love.
If you do, it’s not real love.
Real love knows how to hold an egg
Gently.
An egg is miraculous
Full of life,
Therefore powerful.
Yet it is fragile
And must be handled with care.
Where do egg shells come from?
From eggs hatching hatch-lings,
Hatchlings that will grow up
And fly away.
But then our love
came back one day.
You handled our love with care
And the wisdom that grew
From years of walking on eggshells.
We won’t do that anymore.
No need to fear.
Only to fly!
A new world waits for us to find it.
Today’s Stream of Consciousness prompt was “egg.”
If you’d like to join in the fun, visit:
The Friday Reminder and Prompt for #SoCS March 19/16
Here are the rules:
1. Your post must be stream of consciousness writing, meaning no editing, (typos can be fixed) and minimal planning on what you’re going to write.
2. Your post can be as long or as short as you want it to be. One sentence – one thousand words. Fact, fiction, poetry – it doesn’t matter. Just let the words carry you along until you’re ready to stop.
3. There will be a prompt every week. I will post the prompt here on my blog on Friday, along with a reminder for you to join in. The prompt will be one random thing, but it will not be a subject. For instance, I will not say “Write about dogs”; the prompt will be more like, “Make your first sentence a question,” “Begin with the word ‘The’,” or simply a single word to get your started.
4. Ping back! It’s important, so that I and other people can come and read your post! For example, in your post you can write “This post is part of SoCS:” and then copy and paste the URL found in your address bar at the top of this post into yours. Your link will show up in my comments for everyone to see. The most recent pingbacks will be found at the top.
5. Read at least one other person’s blog who has linked back their post. Even better, read everyone’s! If you’re the first person to link back, you can check back later, or go to the previous week, by following my category, “Stream of Consciousness Saturday,” which you’ll find right below the “Like” button on my post.
6. Copy and paste the rules (if you’d like to) in your post. The more people who join in, the more new bloggers you’ll meet and the bigger your community will get!
7. As a suggestion, tag your post “SoCS” and/or “#SoCS” for more exposure and more views.
8. Have fun!
March 19, 2016 at 12:18 pm
I enjoyed reading this. Yes indeed, walking on eggshells in the name of love is not love. Real love knows how to hold an egg 🙂
March 19, 2016 at 5:54 pm
I’m glad you enjoyed it, Jacqueline. 🙂 I had to learn this lesson the hard way, but so thankful to have learned.
March 19, 2016 at 2:10 pm
So beautiful. So true.
March 19, 2016 at 5:55 pm
Thankful, beautiful one.
March 19, 2016 at 6:06 pm
thank you for prodding me, JoAnna
to carefully check my eggs 🙂
March 19, 2016 at 6:29 pm
🙂 You’re welcome. Glad I could help!
March 19, 2016 at 7:10 pm
Reblogged this on Loving Me, Too.
March 19, 2016 at 9:07 pm
I like the metaphor of walking on egg shells in your post. Very true. 🙂
March 19, 2016 at 11:21 pm
Thanks, Deborah. Glad you like it. 🙂
March 21, 2016 at 11:22 pm
I’ve struggled with this too.. hopefully not any more! Nice post, JoAnna 🙂
March 22, 2016 at 2:49 am
Thank you, Mary. I hope we both continue in relationships in which we are free to relax and be ourselves. 🙂
March 23, 2016 at 1:04 pm
This was such a lovely metaphor on love, JoAnna! Gentle and balanced …. Beautiful!
March 24, 2016 at 7:03 pm
Lovely poem, JoAnna. 🙂
April 13, 2016 at 7:48 am
Carrying and tending for eggs is very important. I once walked on egg shells for years. Make sure those who read this will try 🙂
April 13, 2016 at 7:51 am
Try not to walk in egg shells. Didn’t finish my sentence!