She can enthuse me, transfuse me,
The ocean can’t confuse me.
Except when she’s so full of herself
She makes a sudden drop off shelf,
Or pulls me with an undertoad
making walking such a load.
But on most days she brings me joy,
Slapping playfully like I’m her toy.
Or gives me such a sweet caress,
Her waters, oh my soul doth bless.
She tickles me with bubbles free
And makes my heart smile with glee.
The ocean makes me feel at home
Remembering my mother’s womb.
Floating in a water world
Waiting for a life unfurled,
A life with waves that knocked me down
and made me want to stay aground.
But then love taught me how to swim
So I could dive back in again.
Linda’s Stream of Consciousness Saturday post prompt for today was “enthuse.”
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August 8, 2015 at 4:01 pm
i can imagine
the ocean smiling
to this 🙂
August 8, 2015 at 5:29 pm
Ah, yes. I bet she is. Thanks for that imagining!
August 8, 2015 at 5:54 pm
What an absolutely joyful posting. This took me to happy memories, moved me around as water and waves do, and left me in a very happy moment. Thank you for that. Peace, Harlon
August 8, 2015 at 7:03 pm
Oh, I’m so glad this left you in that happy moment! It’s my pleasure to be part of it 🙂 Thank you for your kind words, returning the happy moment to me! 🙂
August 9, 2015 at 9:06 pm
Glad you are in the vast ocean waters once again, JoAnne. It is amazing how the waves calm and caress when Love is your swim coach! And even when they don’t, you’ve become that much more powerful a swimmer! Water is such a beautiful element of our world… Even the air has a little bit of water mixed in for good measure…
August 10, 2015 at 2:55 am
I like having love as a swim coach. Good point about less calm water making me a more powerful swimmer, as long as we respect her power. 🙂 Thank you for this beautiful response, Michael.
August 10, 2015 at 6:00 am
I can feel the happy sound of the waves 🙂 Refreshing read!
August 10, 2015 at 2:16 pm
Thank you, Prajakta! I’m glad you enjoyed it.